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Post by reji8627 on Feb 27, 2012 15:58:42 GMT -5
Name: reji8627 regi8627
Nickname regi, reji.
Race: alicorn
Gender male
Age: years beyond knowing, but stuck in a perpetual filly state.
Cutie Mark: depends on it's form
Pet: dog. unknown breed
Residence: massive cavern that is invisible unless you know about it with a secret entrance in the middle of the everfree forest
Likes: gaming, being alone, swinging, testing limits(learned her "limit breaker" technique from it.).
Dislikes: social interactions, outside, being cooped up too long.
Others: nothing much, unless i need to clarify it's abilities
Personality: friendly and small. looks like it rushes but doesn't actually.
Looks/picture: green with a necklace and tiara/crown
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Post by Trixie on Feb 27, 2012 16:48:25 GMT -5
If I may add, I'd like to give some specifics you could definitely improve that application on.
1. The "Name" field shouldnt be your username (unless your pony's name actually has those numbers in it). I think you mean to put some of those from the Nicknames field into the Name part.
2. A cutie mark that changes form? I dunno about that, good sir. This means the pony could have infinitely many talents or just several different ones, which would exceed the power of Celestia herself. I would call godmodding on it. This goes with the practically immortal age.
3. An invisible(but somehow massive) cavern in the middle of Everfree...unless you "know about it". That just seems really...iffy to me.
4. The alicorn thing is a nono.
That is just my two cents though. I hope this just makes it easier for you to figure out what it needs to be accepted.
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Post by Applejack on Feb 27, 2012 16:53:44 GMT -5
^Trixie, you are fine. That's your job, and you've got it all right. =)
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Post by Rainbow Dash on Feb 27, 2012 17:04:39 GMT -5
I'm having some questions about this cave as well.
1. how did it get invisible, i think a story on this would need to be shared before I'd look into allowing it, at least describe it. Is it Ethereal? Are there spells to keep other Ponies from finding it?
How about instead of a massive invisible cave. He has a place of residence at the bottom of an old well with a rope ladder?
((And all of what Trixie said XD))
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Post by reji8627 on Feb 27, 2012 17:14:47 GMT -5
well, the changing cutiemark is because she changes when she uses her power which i can't think of a fancy name of, but allows her to control things. also, though you haven't asked yet, her "limit breaker" is her infinitium form, she controls everything and nothing and can see through them.
As for the cave, it is underground with a detector for bringing it up. it is very well hidden otherwise, but still seeable. a do agree both are somewhat overpowered.
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Post by reji8627 on Feb 27, 2012 17:19:17 GMT -5
If I may add, I'd like to give some specifics you could definitely improve that application on. 1. The "Name" field shouldnt be your username (unless your pony's name actually has those numbers in it). I think you mean to put some of those from the Nicknames field into the Name part. 2. A cutie mark that changes form? I dunno about that, good sir. This means the pony could have infinitely many talents or just several different ones, which would exceed the power of Celestia herself. I would call godmodding on it. This goes with the practically immortal age. 3. An invisible(but somehow massive) cavern in the middle of Everfree...unless you "know about it". That just seems really...iffy to me. 4. The alicorn thing is a nono. That is just my two cents though. I hope this just makes it easier for you to figure out what it needs to be accepted. 1. that is it's name and it's because, if i make a back story, the name has appeared in a lime green aura above it since when it appeared into the world. 2. check other reply 3.check other reply 4.it is a bit but yeah it is a alicorn whether you like it or not. It also has steel feathers that can be used if she is in a fight and doesn't want to revel it's abilities. |
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Post by Trixie on Feb 27, 2012 17:19:26 GMT -5
well, the changing cutiemark is because she changes when she uses her power which i can't think of a fancy name of, but allows her to control things. also, though you haven't asked yet, her "limit breaker" is her infinitium form, she controls everything and nothing and can see through them. As for the cave, it is underground with a detector for bringing it up. it is very well hidden otherwise, but still seeable. a do agree both are somewhat overpowered. That....that simply won't do, sorry. Princess Celestia is currently the most powerful canon pony we know, and your OC controlling everything AND nothing seems way above what Celestia has been shown to be capable of. If you're looking for a cutie mark that dictates control(which is still a rather controversial power in my eyes), I would think a cross with strings attached to a pony would be acceptable. ( Also I accidentally edited your post instead of replied to it, but its back to normal now. Sorry! ^^;; ) It's not whether we like it or not, it's whether its against our rules or not. You'll have to pick a race other than alicorn if you wish to have this character accepted. |
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Post by reji8627 on Feb 27, 2012 17:22:02 GMT -5
well, the changing cutiemark is because she changes when she uses her power which i can't think of a fancy name of, but allows her to control things. also, though you haven't asked yet, her "limit breaker" is her infinitium form, she controls everything and nothing and can see through them. As for the cave, it is underground with a detector for bringing it up. it is very well hidden otherwise, but still seeable. a do agree both are somewhat overpowered. That....that simply won't do, sorry. Princess Celestia is currently the most powerful canon pony we know, and your OC controlling everything AND nothing seems way above what Celestia has been shown to be capable of. If you're looking for a cutie mark that dictates control(which is still a rather controversial power in my eyes), I would think a cross with strings attached to a pony would be acceptable. ( Also I accidentally edited your post instead of replied to it, but its back to normal now. Sorry! ^^;; ) the cutiemark is it's current form, be it lightning, granite, Boron, or Nothingness, or some other thing. |
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Post by reji8627 on Feb 27, 2012 17:24:39 GMT -5
oh whoops, missed that in the rules, instead how about being a unicorn with immense power and has a enchanted pair of diamond wings, or if not diamond steel?
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Post by Nyx on Feb 27, 2012 17:25:51 GMT -5
Personally, I don't like OC Alicorns (Luna and Celestia are supposed to be unique) except of course Cadence and Nyx (that ones up for debate still but c'mon....) i mean you need limits of course and being able to fly and do magic...ehh...just pick a unicorn if you like magic, and a pegasi if you like flying, I know its a tough choice but still....
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Post by Trixie on Feb 27, 2012 17:32:35 GMT -5
oh whoops, missed that in the rules, instead how about being a unicorn with immense power and has a enchanted pair of diamond wings, or if not diamond steel? Wings like that are kind of odd too for the canon universe. Immense power is controversial and will take some good convincing to allow. I don't want you to completely remake your character if you don't want to, but Reji needs some severe toning down. What in Equestria would she need excessive power for, and where could she have possibly gotten it? If she is so powerful, how come the two Princess haven't dealt with her yet? There's a lot of room for improvement here. |
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Post by reji8627 on Feb 27, 2012 17:53:53 GMT -5
oh whoops, missed that in the rules, instead how about being a unicorn with immense power and has a enchanted pair of diamond wings, or if not diamond steel? Wings like that are kind of odd too for the canon universe. Immense power is controversial and will take some good convincing to allow. I don't want you to completely remake your character if you don't want to, but Reji needs some severe toning down. What in Equestria would she need excessive power for, and where could she have possibly gotten it? If she is so powerful, how come the two Princess haven't dealt with her yet? There's a lot of room for improvement here. The reason with the princesses not knowing is because she rarely uses her powers or a could make her an a friend of celestia and luna. the wing are a bit clumsy though. the power was from her being born through a spell gone wrong(knida like Nyx but it was via dragons and they ran when it started breaking apart) |
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Post by Applejack on Feb 27, 2012 19:52:20 GMT -5
What about a unicorn with fake wings who pretends he's an alicorn, but can't really use his fake wings? =)
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Post by Rainbow Dash on Feb 27, 2012 20:24:03 GMT -5
What about a unicorn with fake wings who pretends he's an alicorn, but can't really use his fake wings? =) Thats INGENIOUSin all seriousness, this would be a good substitute |
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Post by reji8627 on Feb 27, 2012 20:26:31 GMT -5
What about a unicorn with fake wings who pretends he's an alicorn, but can't really use his fake wings? =) no, it's just really bad at flying(unless i make it go to a flying camp, via the computer of course XD) though the wings are somewhat lifelike from the enchantment, but it can take them off and use them as dual swords. |
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